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This email contains errors in terms of grammar, message, purpose, structure, and tone. 1. Identify and mark any errors in this email. 2. Rewrite this email to ensure employees of Sprinklez Donutz, Inc. are well informed of the hazardous virus outbreak. 1. Change the email header to be from a specific and appropriate department head (who would be sending this email?) 2. Adapt or omit information that is necessary to convey the message in a professional way. 3. After rewriting the assignment, write a one-paragraph summary of where the original message went wrong and what you did to correct it. Did you reorder or omit anything from the original email? Why? Why were some things unnecessary to the message? How did you combine or reword sentences to make the message more coherent? See attached link below for the INCORRECT email:

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