No sources needed. Please edit/write parts of my essay (Common App Prompt 5), based on the prompt: Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.
I attached 2 examples essays for you to take a look at. Try to make the essay as good as possible. Dont care about any words limits as i can always remove words on my own. I would really like the essay to be similiar to Example Essay 2 and reveal good character traits about myself.