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yeah good grammer and best story
this is my story also
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Rikki Tikki was looking for something but didn’t know what he needed, but then he thought he hadn’t seen Darzee’s Wife for some time and wanted to talk to her. Darzee and Rikki have gotten closer to each other, and they like to talk to each other a lot. A few days later when Rikki Tikki was roaming around the backyard he saw Darzze looking worried he called out
DARZEE DARZEE right here, *Darzee’s wife looked down”
“Hey Rikki I need to tell you something very and you need to hear it,” Darzee said,*
” Okay go ahead”.
“You know how you killed all the cobras, well you didn’t kill all of them there is still one alive Darzee looking worried
“I made sure they were all killed, don’t worry Darzee”.
“I have warned you Rikki it’s a baby cobra it could hurt one of your family members”
It’s fine Darzee I will let the baby cobra anywhere near Teddy or his parents.
Once he realized that Darzee flew away without saying anything to him Rikki got angry that she didn’t hear what he had to say. Rikki didn’t think much then *he thought to himself it’s just a baby cobra anyway I have fought his/her parents it’s no big deal.*
Days have passed and Rikki has not spotted a baby cobra he thought Darzee just misunderstood what she saw.
One day He was exploring more of the backyard and seeing new things around the backyard, But then he saw a Bright red thing that looked like a snake, the back of his head looked like the front of his face. Rikki tried to get a closer look by following the red bright snake. The chase stopped when Rikki heard Teddy yelling. He stopped chasing and went back to the backyard and wandered around.” There might be a cobra but that cobra is no match for me, ” Rikki said to himself. The following next day he saw the bright red snake again It was a baby cobra The cobra started hissing at Rikki, “Hello My name is Fuego you may know me as you killed all my Parents and siblings, but that’s fine I’m here and I’ll make sure that this time I will kill you” then Fuego starting hissing angrily over and over, as the cobra disappeared in the garden.
Rikki Tikki Wanted to teach that cobra to stay away from his new family Rikki Tikki was thinking to himself, “Darzee’s wife said so I heard that you had seen the baby cobra was alive, so was I right as she landed on the ground looking at his eyes”. “Yeah you were right maybe I should have listened to you but it’s just a baby cobra anyway it can’t do much Rikki said” “Your right Rikki your a brave mongoose and I trust you with anything Rikki Darzee’s wife said.” But little did Rikki or Darzee know that Feugo had heard everything and he was ready to kill both of them. As Rikki and Darzee were talking to each other, Fuego had the perfect chance to bite Darzee’s wife, Feugo jumped at Darzee’s wife bits into her nape, and held her nape for a second before letting go of her. Before Darzee could say anything she was laying on the ground dead, Rikki’s eyes were beginning to get red, Feugo started slithering away, Rikki started following Fuego as he was running away, Fuego stopped and got his neck up high
“ Started hissing loudly “ If I were you I would just give up your no match for me you little mongoose”
“ I have defeated other cobras and I’m not going to give up on a baby cobra”
“ Are you sure “Rikki” then one of us is going to make it alive Rikki Takki”
Rikki was ready for the match and so was Fuego, Rikki jumped at Fuego’s neck he was close to biting on his neck but the baby cobra moved before Rikki could take a bite. The baby cobra started defending himself. He got his neck up high but he was no match for Rikki tried once again for that baby cobra and got him right at the neck and let him. “Rikki said you’re no match for me” When he killed that baby cobra he started running to see Darzee’s wife but as he started running his vision started getting blurry and he closed his eyes for a second and everything turned black.
“Rikki Rikki wake up it’s time to wake up remember we have a big”
“How are you alive Darzee are you not dead”?
“What are you talking about Rikki I’m not dead”.?
Rikki then finally knew it was all just a dream and nothing was real”
“Rikki are you okay today”! Darzee’s wife asked.
“I’m Fine now let us go to Darzee and let us play around the backyard”.
The end
Nothing was real and it was all just a dream for Rikki