I have thesis I would like from u to change it to make it better. my teacher said to me this “Your thesis is not an argument. Tell me what you’re going to try to convince me to believe. You’re simply telling me that there are many theories. That’s not as interesting or as focused as if you were to tell me what YOU want me to believe.” can fix it? 1)- Introduction: A) Thesis Statement: There are many arguments on Tupac that he is alive, like; he was a big fan of Machiaveli, he was burned after death without post-mortem, and there is also an application of seven days theory. 2)- Tupac’s Love for Machiavelli: A) Lifestyle of Machiavelli. B) Pretending to be dead. C) Books and History of Machiavelli.3)- Post-Mortem of Tupac: A) Was Tupac Buried? B) Investigation of Police on his dead body. C)- Concept of resurrection.4)- Seven Days Theory: A) Attacked on 7th September. B) Attacked at 4:03 (4+3=7) C) Did any bullet touch Suge? D) Bullet proof jacket of Tupac. 5)- Conclusion:After reviewing all this information it can be proved that Tupac shakur is still alive and he has proved that he was a big fan of Machiavelli, and it is strange that he was burned without Post-mortem and 7 days theory even exist on his so called murder. Can you fix it** I want an argument thesis that Tupac Still Alive*****Here is some Documents might help.Thesis: I want to argue that Tupac is still alive.Only Thesis and if you see something needs to change, change it please because I’m gonna post research paper about this Outline. :)Thaaaaaank u 🙂
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1)
Black Jesus found in Tupac Shakur | Accurate Essays. (n.d.). Retrieved September 21,
2016, from http://www.accurateessays.com/samples/black-jesus-found-in-tupac-shakur/
I chose this essay “Black Jesus found in Tupac Shakur” because I found it an interesting topic
and trying to convince me. This essay describes how there is a black Jesus inside Tupac Shakur
by matching Jesus’s personality with Tupac Shakur’s personality.
2)
2Pac Bio | 2Pac Career. (n.d.). Retrieved September 21, 2016, from
http://www.mtv.com/artists/2pac/biography/
Actually, I decided to look at “MTV WEBSITE” because MTV channel invited Tupac many
times to do an interview with him. So, I knew I’m going to find a lot of information about Tupac.
This article talks about Tupac’s life what he was in the past, and when he joined his first group,
etc.
3)
Pinn, A. B., & Easterling, P. (2009). FOLLOWERS OF BLACK JESUS ON ALERT:
THOUGHTS ON THE STORY OF TUPAC SHAKUR’S LIFE/DEATH/LIFE. Black Theology:
An International Journal, 7(1), 31-44.
I picked this when I saw “BLACK JESUS.” In the journal, some people called him “Black
Jesus” for some reasons. Also, the seven-day theory album has many conversations and debates
on Tupac Shakur perhaps as prophet or savior. Moreover, it mentioned here that he might return,
so many people are waiting for him since 1996 like they are waiting for Jesus Chris.
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Edwards, W. (2002). From Poetry to Rap: The Lyrics of Tupac Shakur. Western Journal
Of Black Studies, 26(2), 61.
I’m interested in the way that Tupac Shakur talks and writes his poetry, so I decide to look for
his ways. This Journal mentioned when Tupac Shakur started to write his poetry. Also, how he
changed his poetry to Rap, his spectacular skills to play with words. How he excelled in the
phonetic proficiency ardor that characterizes working class speech culture. His way to Rap made
one of the best-selling rapper in the whole universal.
5)
Reed, R. (2014, May 23). Tupac’s Final Words Revealed by Police Officer on Scene of
Murder. Retrieved September 21, 2016, from http://www.rollingstone.com/music/news/tupacsfinal-words-revealed-by-police-officer-on-scene-of-murder-20140523
In fact, I picked this article because I need to know how Tupac Shakur was shot, and who was
there. This article pointed out where he was before the shooting and who was with him.
Furthermore, what his last words. Basically, this article tells us what happened that night.
6)
Shakur, T. (1999). The Rose That Grew From Concrete. MTV Books.
Actually, I chose this book because it will help in my research paper in different ways. Also, this
book has a lot of Shakur’s poetry written by his hand: moreover, my professor recommended it
to me. This book published in (1999) by MTV Books. Nikki Giovanni wrote the prelude and
Shakur’s manager Leila Steinberg, but Shakur’s mother wrote the preface. Moreover, “The Rose
That Grew From Concrete” is book has a lot of Shakur’s poetries that was written between 1989
– 1991.
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Bodner, B. (2016). Holla if ya hear me: Rappers influenced by rap icon Tupac Shakur.
Retrieved September 13, 2016, from http://www.nydailynews.com/entertainment/rappersinfluenced-rap-icon-tupac-shakur-gallery-1.2676085
Indeed, I chose this website to see how the best rapper inspired the rappers nowadays. Tupac’s
songs left a significant trace on hip-hop world, which is in fact affected on many rappers and
taught them a lot. Many rappers learned a lot from Tupac Shakur; for example, Eminem, 50
Cent, Rick Ross, etc.
8)
Tupac Shakur, Hip-Hop Immortal. (2014, September 4). Retrieved from
http://www.bbc.co.uk/programmes/b04g10zp
In fact, I picked out this article because of its title “Tupac Shakur, Hip-Hop Immortal.”. It turns
out its British website and that shocked me; this article mentioned that Tupac’s “music is still the
most requested on UK prison radio.” Also, that Tupac is the Black Panther’s son, and he became
an actor and called as “a street thug.” Furthermore, regardless of what people called him, he
became one of the best rappers in the world.
9)
Bell, C. (n.d.). Top 20 reasons why 2Pac is alive. Retrieved September 13, 2016, from
http://www.donmega.com/20-reasons-why-tupac-is-still-alive.php
When I chose my topic, which is about Tupac Shakur, there is something got my full attention.
Does Tupac Still Alive?! And this is the most question has been repeated many times since he
disappeared in 1996. So, I started to search for this question, and I found a lot of different
answers. But this website gave me more than 17 reasons that Tupac is still alive. The fact is most
people don’t know where is Tupac after that incident.
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G. (2013). Tupac Shakur: The Man, the Myth, The Legend. (with images) • GroupTupac.
Retrieved September 21, 2016, from https://storify.com/GroupTupac/life-and-history-of-tupac
I chose this website due to its enormous amount of Tupac’s information. This website has
Tupac’s information before and after he disappeared. Also, it describes Tupac Shakur as myth
and legend. His fans thought he would come in 2003 according to “The 7 Day Theory” they
analyzed it that he would return in 2003. But, he came back in 2012 as a hologram.
Running head: DOES TUPAC STILL ALIVE?
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Outline
1)- Introduction:
A) Thesis Statement: There are many arguments on Tupac that he is alive, like; he was a
big fan of Machiavelli, he was burned after death without post-mortem, and there is also
an application of seven days theory.
2)- Tupac’s Love for Machiavelli:
A) The Lifestyle of Machiavelli.
B) Pretending to be dead.
C) Books and History of Machiavelli.
3)- Post-Mortem of Tupac:
A) Was Tupac Buried?
B) Investigation of Police on his dead body.
C)- Concept of resurrection.
4)- Seven Days Theory:
A) Attacked on 7th September.
B) Attacked at 4:03 (4+3=7)
C) Did any bullet touch Suge?
D) Bullet proof jacket of Tupac.
Running head: DOES TUPAC STILL ALIVE?
5)- Conclusion
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