Please make the following changes to the essay…No plagiarism. You do not have to change the essay at all. Keep it the same, just make the changes below:*****However, your introduction, first, and second body paragraphs are too short. Keep in mind that as stated in the rubric, you need to have at least five sentences per paragraph.Please make sure to follow the feedback provided in attached document.Prof. Hernandez
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Changing Our Lives
Rashenda Fraley
ENG 090
Professor Elvia Hernandez, M.S. in Ed
8/29/2016
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Introduction
As education has always been considered as the key to success, I believe that it can take
me places. Other than going places from the choices of joining college at this moment, my life
will be more exciting because of meeting new people in college. Joining college is a big
opportunity for me for good exposure, achieving my career goals, improving my life through
knowledge and, shaping my social life.
Beginning college life at this moment is the best time for me to change my life through
good exposure. The opportunity of traveling to college will enable me to be a mature
independent individual as I continue getting used to living away from home and my parents. At
this stage of my life, much confidence is going to be built by taking a step of being responsible
for my life as I get to choose the right path from the wrong with the help of my college.
Achieving my career goals in life has always been my biggest dream. As I join college at
this moment, I believe it is at the right time because of the passion that I have in pursuing
professional goals as well. With the knowledge acquired in future, I will be able to change more
lives in future. The resolution of furthering my studies is not only to benefit me in my career but
also, it is to enable me to be more creative at my youthful age for the future world.
I have made a resolution to further my studies now to better my social life. I believe this
is the best time for me to get to learn how to respect people from different cultural backgrounds
through exposure in college. Making new friends at this moment in college will prepare me in
ways on how to deal with people from different regions in the global market. It gives me the
advantage of building my network with people from various countries. In college, the exchange
program is one of the biggest opportunities of going places as it is with motives of learning and
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getting involved with other international cultures. It is the best advantage for me to take at this
time as I join college.
Conclusion
Joining college now is the best time for me to learn how to appreciate people from
various areas. The passion I have to begin my career life and becoming a respectful professional
in future will be best achieved now at my youthful stage. The new college experience is a good
exposure for me now as I will be able to build more confidence to work independently as a
mature individual. The experience of leaving home to start a new life is one that will help me
become a reliable person as I will get to make good choices for my life. The resolution of joining
college now is at the best moment of my life because I am ready to learn with a passion for my
career and give back to the people in future with motives of changing our lives.
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