This is what needs corrected:
There are a lot of really wonderful things about this rough publish and its SO great to see all of your work put together into this one big document. There were some issues that did come up in different sections, however, and those do need to be addressed.
-The abstract is a bit on the short side and you absolutely have room to get a bit more depth in there.
-The case study is a little short and in reading the Audience and Purpose section, that actually reads like the case study, NOT the Audience and Purpose
-The Audience and Purpose section isnt really what it needs to be. This section should be all about who is reading this huge report/research project and what is the overall purpose of it. That wasnt really covered.
-The Research question has first person writing in it, you need to get that out of there (no use of I).
Honestly, the rest of it was this was wonderful and those are the major issues. There were some writing issues in other sections (some further use of the first person) so look that over too.