see my publish copy and with my professors comments on the side. please fix the proposal based on all his the comments.
Below please read as he would like to change topic.
your project could aim to quantify the effect of temperature on the righting behavior and feeding of your seastars, and if you did that you would want to move the information you have in the significance of study section concerning seasonal variation in behavior to the background literature section. If you go that route you should try to use seastar of as narrow a size range as possible, so you can distinguish the effect of size and temperature
Also, please change graphs to better ones that relate more and include error bars.