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can you make this statement a little longer and strong
For whom it may concern,
My name is Sara. The reason that I am writing this letter is on September 7/2022 I was
experiencing sever anxiety and wasn’t feeling good because I heard devastated news from Africa about my father’s death. I am experiencing anxiety as it is and when I heard the bad news my anxiety went up.
You
2 minutes ago
continue……
AS I am in a nursing school and I am willing to dedicate because this has been my dream since I was a little girl. I will do what ever it takes to make this work. Unfortunately the bad news happened right when I was getting ready for my HESI exam. I know I have to leave everything behind and dedicate for my dream as I can not change my fatheres death waht so ever.
Thank you
You
a few seconds ago
I have been a CNA more than 10 years I love what I do and I am excited to do more for my patients when I become a nurse. I was planning to bring my dad to the states and take care of him as I become a nurse unfortunatelly time didn’t allow me.
Thank you
SARA

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