Apple issued a news release about Apple iphone SE. Please read it and evaluate this press release in terms of its 1) news value,  2) content ( read the 4 fundamentals of writing of page 319; use  numbers 3 & 4 to make your  critique)   3) essentials ( inverted pyramid model).  Please read the textbook pp. 319-322 to understand what criteria you should use to evaluate, and incorporate these rules in your answer. Apple – Press Info – Apple Introduces iPhone SE — The Most Powerful Phone with a Four-inch Display

How to revise an essay
To improve an essay, you should go over the entire piece first to understand the overall structure and content. Then, pay attention to individual paragraphs and sentences. Identify any parts that might be difficult to understand and think of ways to clarify them. Make sure to fix any grammatical mistakes or typos. Make sure the sentences connect well and make sense. Lastly, check the beginning and the end of the essay to ensure they effectively summarize the main ideas and make a good impression on the reader.